Cool!

Ooh, nice! I like this one.

The animation is great, and I loved the humor! For a completely improvised script, it was entertaining. Also, the voice acting was pretty good for a first attempt! I suggest you project your voice a bit more though, and try creating a separate style of voice for each character.

For a first in the series, though, it's great! I look forward to your later installments!

Whoa, promising!

I definitely see a lot of potential in this. The art style is great, and the music shockingly fits VERY well with it. I hope you continue to use the 8-bit style in the next episodes!

The only complaint I have is that the animation seems a little rushed at times. For example, you used a lot of motion tweens in places where it would've looked much better if you did it by hand(for example, the sage's walking animation, and the part where he tilts the bag upside down to get the stones, etc).

For a first in the series, though, it's great! I can't wait to see the next one! :D

Oh man!

HUGE improvement over the original! Man, the "Dad" character is even funnier than ever. I just love all of the over-the-top moves he does in his epic quest to fulfill his daily tasks. The animation is superb as well. If work was as action-packed as this, life would be amazing.

Can't wait to see more! :D

Beautiful, and very well-composed!

Ah, finally, something original on the audio portal! (All those crappy game midi uploads ripped from vgmusic.com are pissing me off.)

Firstly, it's a very well-composed piece. It could potentially bring tears! The arrangement itself is ALMOST there. Needs a little more work to really evoke the sadness from your audience. Sadly, this piece is really only marred by the low-quality samples. But that can be easily fixed with a really good piano soundfont! :) (Or you can just record yourself playing a real piano)

Overall, great job! Can't wait to hear more from you! :)

Ooh!

A very soothing ambient piece! The synths you used in the background with the drums fit the piece very well. I could picture this being used as a menu theme for a game.

My only complaint is that it doesn't really branch off into much else. I know it's supposed to be an interlude, but a little more variety in the piece couldn't hurt.

Great job though!

Whoa.

I am seriously in love with this piece. Very catchy and great instrumentation! I wish I could hear this kind of style more often! :D