This really reminds me of something 8-Bit Weapon would do, with more variation and more ambience! I could see this being used on a main menu for a game or something.
Overall, nicely composed. I don't see any major problems as far as the arrangement goes. I love the simple nature of it, too. Keep it up! :)
Thanks! The biggest problem I had when making this song was actually its arrangement. I'm glad that it turned out okay. I don't know any music theory so I kinda of try and work it out by ear and think "Okay, what should I put in text, how should I get this riff to travel smoothly to the next riff etc." but because I don't really know what I'm doing sometimes I worry that it just sounds like a collection of riffs with no backbone.
I'm glad it turned out good :D
Beautiful, and very well-composed!
Ah, finally, something original on the audio portal! (All those crappy game midi uploads ripped from vgmusic.com are pissing me off.)
Firstly, it's a very well-composed piece. It could potentially bring tears! The arrangement itself is ALMOST there. Needs a little more work to really evoke the sadness from your audience. Sadly, this piece is really only marred by the low-quality samples. But that can be easily fixed with a really good piano soundfont! :) (Or you can just record yourself playing a real piano)
Overall, great job! Can't wait to hear more from you! :)
A very soothing ambient piece! The synths you used in the background with the drums fit the piece very well. I could picture this being used as a menu theme for a game.
My only complaint is that it doesn't really branch off into much else. I know it's supposed to be an interlude, but a little more variety in the piece couldn't hurt.
Great job though!
I am seriously in love with this piece. Very catchy and great instrumentation! I wish I could hear this kind of style more often! :D
This is a rather nice piece! Has a nice party/ambient feel to it. The bass usage was great too!
I don't really have any suggestions. You COULD try expanding it a bit more, but that would probably take away from its simplicity and ambience.
Great job! Keep it up!
Very great ambient piece. I could picture it being used in a platformer that takes place in space!
Great effects, and great use of the Sytrus plugin!
Excellent! Keep it up!
Thanks man! Yeah, I could totally see that too. I'll check out your music now :)
Yikes! Another fantastic piece!
Oh man, I love this. The instrumentation is amazingly catchy, or should I say... "funky!"
The only critique I can offer is to make the vocals sound more prominent, as they're overshadowed by the instruments.
Great job! Can't wait to hear more!
Hahaha, I love these lyrics. Very catchy! Also, great job with the instrumentation. :D
Very, VERY impressive! The guitar solo in the beginning was AMAZING. It's very rare you hear live music of this quality on Newgrounds. It's a shame some people have given this low ratings, while poorly made trance music gets all the big honors!
Keep it up, man! I can't wait to hear more from you! :D
Thanks for the kind words, Matt. Really means a lot!
I've gotta say, this is fantastic. A very relaxing and well-composed piece! I'm afraid I don't have any criticism to give on this one.
I can't wait to hear more from you! And I hope your game comes along well! :D
Thank you. More comming soon... I hope.
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